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storypaint ([personal profile] storypaint) wrote2010-12-08 11:45 pm

[Glee] on one knee (Quinn/Mercedes)

Title: on one knee
Fandom: Glee
Length: 405 words
Prompt: Quinn/Mercedes - Knees for [livejournal.com profile] biruuu
Pairing: Quinn/Mercedes
Other: PG-13 for sex.

Excerpt: Learning how to be with a girl was learning everything new. Quinn was amazed at how strongly she felt about actually learning. She'd enjoyed making out with boys, to a degree, but when Mercedes touched her, it was like her skin was on fire with sensation.

Learning how to be with a girl was learning everything new. Quinn was amazed at how strongly she felt about actually learning. She'd enjoyed making out with boys, to a degree, but when Mercedes touched her, it was like her skin was on fire with sensation. It was a thousand times more intense, more real, somehow. She finally understood why celibacy was so hard for most people. She had her first orgasm just riding Mercedes's knee, without even taking her spanks off.

So maybe celibacy wasn't such a high priority now. She wasn't going to get pregnant like this, and unless something in Ohio changed magically, she wasn't going to be able to get legally married either. She wasn't going to wait until she was old to have sex. Not when making out felt this good.

It seemed like a natural progression - from kisses to Frenching, to second base, to this. To being naked in Mercedes's bed, with all of Mercedes's family out of the house, and still wanting more than the brush of hands across skin. Quinn's heart was pounding and she felt nervous. What if she was bad at this? What if she was so bad that Mercedes didn't get off, or she decided it would be easier with boys?

"Quinn?" Mercedes's voice was soft, and her gaze quizzical. She was lying back on the bed, head propped up on a pillow, and her comfort with her nakedness was also something that made Quinn nervous. She was naked, too, sure, but she was cataloging every stretch mark, shifting carefully to present her best profile, and worried that Mercedes wouldn't like her small breasts. Somehow she'd ended up down here, between Mercedes's knees. They were going to do this.

"We don't have to do this if you don't want," Mercedes said when Quinn didn't answer right away. "I'm not going to push you, I promise." She leaned up on her elbows and Quinn almost fell over in her rush to reassure her. She looked down the shape of Mercedes's legs, bent at the knee, and then she leaned forward and kissed her kneecap. Mercedes giggled. Quinn looked up hurriedly, but Mercedes was smiling.

"I want to," Quinn said. "I really do." She ran her fingernails down Mercedes's thigh, enjoying the way that Mercedes shut her eyes and threw her head back.

"You can get it, girl," Mercedes said.

Quinn took a deep breath, and she did.

[identity profile] teadealer.livejournal.com 2010-12-10 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
This fic is lovely, not only because it is a very sweet first time fic, but also because of the insight to the characters' thoughts. For some reason, Mercedes being really comfortable with her own nakedness and Quinn feeling inadecuate seem very IC.

Also, Quinn almost falling over. ♥

[identity profile] storypaint.livejournal.com 2010-12-10 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
I'm very glad to hear it! I really love these two. ♥ Thank you for commenting.

[identity profile] bofoddity.livejournal.com 2010-12-12 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so awesome! I love how Mercedes is the one comfortable with her body while Quinn is a little more insecure, but more than willing to go through with it. It feels so right and I love it. ♥

[identity profile] storypaint.livejournal.com 2010-12-15 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yay thank you so much. I was hoping it would ring true.

[identity profile] ellydash.livejournal.com 2010-12-15 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Came here via [livejournal.com profile] gleerecs - love, love, love the dynamic here, with cautious Quinn and confident Mercedes. Wonderful. <3

[identity profile] storypaint.livejournal.com 2010-12-16 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I love these two.

[identity profile] catreadingdiary.livejournal.com 2010-12-19 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
I liked this story a lot! Thank you for sharing it!

[identity profile] storypaint.livejournal.com 2010-12-19 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for commenting on it!

[identity profile] silverkit.livejournal.com 2011-01-29 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
I adore it when you have Quinn kiss Mercedes knee cap!.

I love this pairing, and it's shame there isn't more fic about them!

Lovely!

[identity profile] storypaint.livejournal.com 2011-01-29 08:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I wish there were more fic for them too.

[identity profile] kaizoku.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful.

[identity profile] storypaint.livejournal.com 2011-02-23 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you ♥