Taken (Meiling/Tomoyo)

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Comm: 30_lyrics
Words: 326
Fandom: Cardcaptor Sakura
Title: Taken
Author: rhap_chan
Theme(s): 22. Wish I could prove I love you, but does that mean I have to walk on water?
Pairing/Characters: Li Meiling/Daidouji Tomoyo
Rating: R for graphic sex
Disclaimer: Cardcaptor Sakura belongs to CLAMP. All fanfiction archived here is a derivative of canon material that is not my property. I do not profit from these writings. The opinions and actions expressed in these stories are not necessarily the views and beliefs of the original author or me.

Excerpt: Meiling's eyes are not green and her smile is still a little bitter.

They've been sleeping together for three months and still Tomoyo does not touch her. She lets Meiling take her as roughly or as softly as the Chinese girl wants. She pants and gasps and mutters and prays, but Tomoyo does not instigate.

Meiling's eyes are not green and her smile is still a little bitter. She likes to have sex with Tomoyo, likes to make love to Tomoyo, but there is a large part of Tomoyo that she cannot touch with her fingers and her heart.

Meiling has sex with Tomoyo, and then they sleep. Tomoyo's back is curved like a comma and it barely brushes against Meiling's back. She will not sleep cuddled in Meiling's arms.

Meiling wakes at three, feeling pressure on her bladder, and before she is truly conscious, she can hear that Tomoyo is crying. She doesn't shift in the bed, feeling awkward. If it were day and Tomoyo had came to her like this, they might have been able to work it out, but the darkness makes them such strangers.

Tomoyo makes a mewling noise, like that o a cat who has been stepped on, and suddenly she turns around to spoon Meiling and desperate fingers fumble for Meiling's breast.

Meiling is frozen, uncertain, as Tomoyo's long fingers slide down her chest and underneath her underwear. Tomoyo is still crying.

Meiling's lips burn, lonely for touch, but Tomoyo takes her carefully from behind, with three of her long pianist's fingers and a blunt thumb on her clitoris. Meiling cannot stop the tide; she jerks and comes with a gasp. When her shudders stop, Tomoyo pulls her hand free and wraps her arm around Meiling's waist.

When morning comes, Tomoyo is gone. For a moment Meiling stands, bleary-eyed, and stares into the bathroom mirror. She wishes her eyes were green. She wishes that she could be the right girl for somebody.

She steps into the shower and gets ready for a new day.

Comments

[beansidhe-baby.livejournal.com]

Poor Meiling must have a bit of an inferiority complex at this stage. Though it is good to see Tomoyo cry over Sakura since she is always so accepting in canon. "If the one I love is happy then I'm happy," and so on. Seeing her cry makes her so much more human.

[pleonasm]

I feel so spoiled getting all these reviews.

I can see how Tomoyo is quite accepting in canon, but I wish we had seen how she got there. She just seemed to shrug and accept. I think this is a little more realistic. ^_^

[beansidhe-baby.livejournal.com]

I can see how Tomoyo is quite accepting in canon, but I wish we had seen how she got there. She just seemed to shrug and accept. I think this is a little more realistic. ^_^

Very true. No one is that saintly without a goodly amount of off screen angst

I feel so spoiled getting all these reviews.

I feel spoiled getting to read all this great fic ^_^