http://bloodrivendream.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bloodrivendream.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] storypaint 2011-03-24 02:30 am (UTC)

"I, I thought maybe that you were acting out in fear of your true feelings, due to the conflict of your religious beliefs," Rachel answers uncertainly.
--Aww, Rachel.

- I liked the "she doesn't like musicals" part.

they throw barbs at each other like they used to before arguing became foreplay, not caring how much they hurt each other.
--I really liked that line.

"Mine," he says hoarsely, "is Rachel Berry." His heart is pounding as he waits for their reactions.

"But she's not famous!" Finn protests. "Right? She didn't get on Broadway yet, did she?"

--I laughed. James Bond is like one of the top straight guy go gay for exceptions, that part of the scene amused me to.

The totally both would be such bridezillas. Obsessive, high-maintenance, perfectionists...
I would love to read that.

I really like this whole story.

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