http://comeundone.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] comeundone.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] storypaint 2010-07-26 03:59 am (UTC)

This is brilliant. I had to google the disease to find out some background on it and wow, it's definitely something you have to change your life around to work with. I think you made this very realistic and in character. I loved the way it was told through websites and blogs and messengers. I also liked how you didn't make any of Rachel's relationships a focus and focused more on her career and fibro. This was just AMAZING and I really loved it.

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