ext_123222 ([identity profile] andymere.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] storypaint 2009-07-25 04:30 am (UTC)

sense of deja vu to see Eriol silhouetted against

If you change the word 'see' to 'dream' it makes more sense, since Eriol was never physically seen with the Tokyo tower. In fact, actually, In Sakura's dreams he wasn't even on the Tokyo tower, it was Tsukimine Shrine. If you want to change Eriol to Yue, that would make the most sense.

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